Cambridge PET Writing Task – Common Mistakes with Computer Essays
1 Introduction
Under exam pressure, students often make avoidable mistakes in their writing. Let’s look at a common PET writing task about computers where Maria shows typical B1 level errors in both language and organization. Understanding these mistakes will help you avoid them in your own exam.
Key Terms
- avoidable
- can be prevented or stopped from happening
2 MY NEW COMPUTER – Poor Writing Example
Task: Write an email to your friend Tom about your new computer. Include:
• where you bought it and how much it cost
• what features it has
• why you need help with it
Maria’s Response:
Hi Tom!
I want tell you about my new computer what I bought yesterday. Its really cool and I am very happy with it!!!
I buyed it from Computer World shop and the price was 599€. The computer have a very fast processer and lots of memory for store my photos and games and stuff. The screen is very big and nice colours.
I try to install some programs but I dont know how to do it proper. Can you come to my house and help me??? Maybe tomorrow or when you have time. I really need help because I want to start using it quick.
I hope you can help me!
Bye bye
Maria
Key Terms
- features
- special parts or characteristics of something
- install
- to put a program onto a computer so you can use it
- processor
- the main part of a computer that controls how it works
3 How Many Errors Did You Spot?
Before we analyze Maria’s writing together, take a moment to identify the mistakes you can see. Look for problems with:
– Grammar and spelling
– Email structure and style
– Punctuation and capitalization
– Word choice and vocabulary
How many different types of errors can you find?
Key Terms
- identify
- to recognize and name something
- structure
- the way something is organized or arranged